Thursday, May 11, 2006

you there


you there,
sitting cross legged by the window -
do i know you?
have i seen you?
why have you come?

you there,
sitting cross-legged by the edge of that backyard architecture where weeds fester between landscape rocks and soil black as black night speckled with fertilizing stars white as white light how often have we stared through reflections like these how often have we stared through through glass coated garden ponds like these through shiny shimmering suburban motel windows just like these...

you there,
sitting cross legged by the provincial -
do i know you?
have i seen you?
why have you come?

you there,
sitting cross legged by the finely framed mirror admiring your own eyes memorizing your own eyes drawing with white haze drawing with charred black carbon tips those still framed portraits those life sized and curly haired still framed portraits trapped on your memory page so callously smudged by time so carelessly smeared by time beyond recognition that face once so well known now beyond recognition...

you there,
sitting cross legged by the telephone -
do i know you?
have i seen you?
why have you come?

7 Comments:

Blogger ufukhati said...

I CAN'T SEE YOU

I can't see you
but I'm running on your words
and listening to the sound
of your soul.

I see with my soul
not only with my eyes
and your words run deep
in human heart.

Thanks for you words
without them life seems so silent.

5/18/2006  
Anonymous Lauren said...

You there.
I am sitting cross legged in Athens.
I am Typing to you
Because I miss you...

5/18/2006  
Blogger jack said...

thank you very much darma. you are my first malaysian reader i think. i've checked your site and found it to be very rewarding. thanks again.

lauren, i miss you too. you're way too sweet. ciao.

5/18/2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i've come to find you

5/18/2006  
Blogger ufukhati said...

jack,

/1/ I'm a reader. I,m so pleased to "meeting" writers like you. Poetry is very rewarding : emotionally, rationally and intellectually : for me.

/2/ PS : In my previous comment,
there is a typing error (line 9). It should be read "Thanks for your words".

5/18/2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very pretty design! Keep up the good work. Thanks.
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7/21/2006  
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7/22/2006  

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